The best way to make scarier & memorable villains.

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Let's talk making memorable villains. Villains are so interesting, and they really make horror media stand out. Including one, two or even multiple villains in your story is going to make your story feel alive. But firstly, what exactly is a villain?

Narratively, the villain is the engine of conflict. In mythological terms, they are the usually shadow of the story world itself. The villain represents the terror of the story, fully embodying the darkness of the text.

Most villains neatly fit into a few archetypes. These can be subverted, and are done so to drive up the fear. It's the use of seeing recognizable characterizations that can turn irredeemable actions into empathetic tragedies. 

The Beast / Monster

The terror that lurks beyond the safety of the campfire story-time. The Beast is an archetype that represents the dark side of nature, the id, and everything society pretends to have killed. Mythological examples: the dragon, the minotaur, the hellish creature. It's the main antagonist in Jaws, The Thing and Alien.

Subverting it, where the beast is the victim, or the beast is a guardian can lead to powerful and emotional effects. The beast might exist to suffer, maybe to keep something hidden to protect something it treasures. The monster's actions could be moral, its sinful means could be quite logical like killing an elite mob that's wronged 1000's.

There are plenty of villain archetypes for you to research for yourself, they include:  The Corruptor/ Infection, The Stalker/Predator, The Doppelgänger/Shape-thief, The False Shepherd/Cult Leader, The Mad Scientist, The Corrupted Innocent, The Caregiver Turned Predator, The Sleeping God, The Everyman/The Banal Villain

Research and find the fit for your villain's archetype, detailing the main aspects that make it recognizable.

When to Use Subversions

Subverting works best when you establish the archetype first, even briefly. Give the audience three beats of recognition (“Oh, it's the cult leader. Yeah, look he's doing a mass ritual. He's going to kill them for his cult!!!”), then pivot. Switching after these beats, the subversion now feels earned because the mythic expectation is doing the heavy lifting. 

If your reader/viewer never feels the archetype, the subversion is just a twist. 

Remember, archetype is nothing more than an established recognizable characterization, that's existed for millenia. So it comes not only with patterns, but with cultural significance that's been brewing in the collective human psyche. And subversion works by forcing the audience to fill in the gaps of the pattern that they thought they recognized, increasing engagement.

Moving from one archetype to another, with the same character becomes extremely engaging for the audience. This is because the subconscious mind tracks it, as humans are wired to see meaning and recognize pattern changes. By following their growth from one archetype to another, the audience gets to interpret WHY this is happened. This surpasses the writers intention, as one person might read into the pattern differently than some one else. 

In basic terms, featuring archetypes in your story does a lot of heavy lifting for your villain and story. Making them grow, or subverting their archetype adds depth, shock and increases engagement to your audiences without the need to force anything. 

The "mad scientist" role migrates from Dr. Weir (who becomes a demonic beast)

Identifying your villain.

Making memorable villains comes with the author truly knowing more than the audiences. These enemies, threats and plot antagonists should be really thought out.

So, be ready to totally know the in's and out's of your main villains psychology. Mastering the psyche of your villain is simple and not as painstaking as it sounds, just draw up a reference sheet for each one. I recommend drawing a mind map, since they allow for more unfiltered ideas. But you can just use bullet points too with subject headings.

Think and note down: their fears, their motivations, the backstory, their relationships, their traits, their growth arcs, their archetypes

This the exercise I recommend for all main characters in 'getting to know' them, like nobody else. The reference can be shared within your production teams too, including performers. From revealing more things about your villain, you'll begin thinking in terms of their world view. And once you are seeing things from their perspective, it lets you identify what the character would say/do. This is imperative, as it stops you from throwing generic and trope-y lines into their mouths.

Symbolism in Villain design

Darth Vader, Pinhead, Pyramid Head (silent hill), these villains have iconic visual symbolism built in to their design. For a design to be villainous, think in terms of shape, colour, texture. Menacing jagged lines, dark or vivid colours. Beyond that, dial into including one symbol in the design. It's enough to become a powerful and memorable look.

Just make sure that the symbol furthers the experience of the story, the journey into the darkness of the text. The audience will experience their own meaning, so don't overthink it. And like in silent hill, the design subverts symbolism turning the 'what is that on it's head! It must link to the rest of this!' but leaving it devoid of any acknowledged meaning, audiences will move mountains, still seeking meaning from the design. That's the purpose of symbols, to elicit meaning beyond the stories medium.

 

A memorable villain is...

 

• one that is wronged by the very things the good guys fight for
• journeys into their darkness without guidance
• is redeemed by seeing error and then mentoring the darkness
• they 'have a point' , turning audiences into their own moral judgement around

These are identifyable characteristics that makes villains the ones to fear or even root for. The common trait between these things is: conflict. Whether it's internal, accidental, discoverable or fixable. But conflict by itself, doesn't mean anything. It requires motivation.

Motivated conflict is where the audience begs for resolution, they're engaged for the events unfold. Never losing sight of motivations, especially during action. This is why having a reference sheet with a villain's motivations is vital, its the bible for every scene where conflict arises.  

The fear of conflict, is what makes horror so compelling. So dialling into the tension of the threat is where storytellers need to become equipped with impactful threatening mechanics.

Types of fearful threat

The brain fears what it doesnt understand. So the master horror storyteller messes with their audience's mind, and often forces them to 'fill in the gaps' themselves.

We can show our audience a world it understands, set in modern day for example.
Then all of a sudden, we see something. It is not from the world as we know it. It is incomprehensible. In real life, the mind will do its best to rationalise something completely removed from our ordinary understanding of the world. But most likely, it would end in turn, tail and run fast and far away from these things. 'Nope.' Ignore it's existence momentarily. 

Build tension around that, say a monster. Think eldritch horror, disgusting demonic monsters, a supernatural threat that shows you things you wish you never saw. 

We can also build tension around things that aren't known, using the absence of knowledge as a mechanic of looming fear. In knowledge of a threat, we can rationalize how to defend ourselves. In the not-known...we fallback on our imaginations, thinking the worst and underestimating our defenses.

This is where gut feeling scares come from. The best horror stories play on fears by 'messing' with the senses before we can relate back to safety. The not-known is a classic brain-based fear that most modern day anxieties and bad beliefs stem from. 

It's up to you to appropriately shake the audience up, to break free from bad beliefs. Inserting a rythym to fill in the gaps of knowledge, and choosing to tell stories of how to deal with that knowledge. 

I am innevitable. They told you the end is coming. But what can we do about? The end is nigh.
We just sit tight, pray and wait. The reveal of whatever the end is...ready or not? This is the easiest way to make a horror threat in my opinion.

Just set a time ticking down, 3-2-1...

For example- 

A tale of boy meets girl, but a man interrupts them saying, 'In 3 nights time, the phantom shall break free. Run you fools'. 
The couple shrug it off like its nothing. The next day, at their appartment, a note is pinned to their door. It reads

'It hunts souls, and in 2 sundowns it shall come for yours!'

The couple choose to ignore it, and upon walking home late one night a strange girls runs towards them. '1 more night, didn't ol' Jack tell you. A dark dream, it's finally ending!' She screams.
The couple now freaked and frantic, they start to see terror everywhere. Is it just in their minds!? They lock their doors and the next night they are expecting something terrible to happen. 
They go to bed, telling themselves it's just this town. Full of crazies. 

But from under their bed, an entity spills out, sucking their life force out from their bodies. Nowhere to run, its too late now.

AN EPIC SHOWDOWN

In typical Joseph Campbell style, heroic narratives, the climax is where the hero transcends the villain and returns with a boon. But in horror, the climax is the moment the psyche is plunged into the base of descent. The showdown is not a triumph. The hero does not slay the dragon and bring back gold. They survive the 'darkness' long enough to simply confirm that the monster was real, that the darkness has teeth. They may never return, and if they do, the world will be gloomier than the journey they intended on.

In The Hero with a Thousand Faces, Campbell identifies the Belly of the Whale as though the hero is “swallowed by the monster.” The villain may well be the whale, but the showdown occurs in the whale’s stomach, and the narrative’s moral purpose is not to escape but to register what the whale digests.

This is why horror villains are rarely defeated in the fairy-tale sense. Michael Myers survives Halloween, the xenomorph survives Alien...The point of maximum depth of the underworld, the darkness, the belly of the monster is not about collecting a boon.

In psychological terms, the villain is frequently the externalised shadow of the hero, the society, or the family. The showdown is therefore not just violence by choice, it is the ritual of acknowledgment. The storyteller is letting audiences face their fears. The hero must look at the villain long enough for the mask to slip. And in doing so, revealing not an 'singular being'...but a mirror.

If it bleeds, what exactly is it?

The xenomorph is flushed into space, not annihilated. The Thing is burned, but Childs may already be infected. The villain showdown does not restore order. The Final Girl trope in horror is popular because they do not defeat the villain from outside the structure of violence. The final girl gets re-initiated into the darkness of the text. Without an inititation, a confrontation or a showdown, the victim remains a victim. 

Instead, the main protagonist of your story should be the one who has looked into the dark and returned with the villains’s eyes. 

The main character moves into the villain’s space, investigates deeper into the house, the mine, the spaceship, the fog. The moment the hero recognizes they are not separate from the darkness, but they are inside it. 

I firmly believe that horror is a descent narrative. Because, modern society requires reminders of what lies beneath the threshold. The masks we make become part of a ritual, that contains the darkness of our lives together or alone, without ignoring it. 

In horror, the hero rarely returns with an elixir. They themselves might never return, and if they do it is with a trauma, a scar, a tale of warning, or a suspicion.

If the protagonist escapes the haunted house without entering the basement, if the slasher is arrested off-screen, if the ancient god is bombed from a safe distance...the narrative is devoid of ritual. 

The community is not safe; they are merely uninformed. The villain's defeat must be a mutual defeat, or the darkness was never truly dark at all.

Vengeance or becoming the killer

A satisfying conclusion, is when a main character, moves beyond their inner conflict. By doing so, it enables them to be peace with all things good, divine, evil. Battling the villain, is therapizing their inner conflict.

The stakes then, should be emotional. Is the enemy related to the main character in some way,  what horror did the villain truly do that effected their livelihood?

Letting out all the devestations, inner conflict and is where the main characters win. It's not simply through violence. But through trying to console the villains inner conflict. The enemy is made to see reason.

And in the attempt, the audience now sees light vs dark more clearly. The villain was never the dark, they were just a means to embody what it means to be absent of loving the inter-connectedness of light and darkness.

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